The sound is rather clipped when all the instruments are together. You might want to either lower the master volume or change the compression.
It's not really my style, so I won't go on about the composition too much - I like the instrumentation, but I find to melody a little repetitive for my tastes. The breakdown & buildup from 1:36 is nicely done; its uplifting, and it doesn't linger on forever like some.
Ok thanks im gonna fix the clipping as best as i can.
Step away from the compressor.
Every beat ducks the entire song behind it. From 1:17 %u2212 1:25, the kicks, rather than adding volume and fullness, eat away at the sound - leaving me hungry for a real build up. In addition, the excess volume makes the guitars sound clipped and ugly. Lower the volumes of your instruments, and do some *subtle* compression.
It sounds like there's a good song underneath that. I like the breakdown especially (both phases of it) - but its hard to enjoy this rendition.
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