Clipped
The sound is rather clipped when all the instruments are together. You might want to either lower the master volume or change the compression.
It's not really my style, so I won't go on about the composition too much - I like the instrumentation, but I find to melody a little repetitive for my tastes. The breakdown & buildup from 1:36 is nicely done; its uplifting, and it doesn't linger on forever like some.